Ironically Yours and Forever... No More

Ironically Yours and Forever... No More

A Poem by Blade & Blood (The Black Plague)
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"If you're going through hell, keep going." ~Winston Churchill

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Deceiving blood is showered from above,

Horribly mistaken as my first love.

A soft kiss in the pouring rain

Before a sudden stab of unspeakable pain.

 

A harlot's voice is heard from afar,

Playing innocence to fade away from my heart.

I was stabbed in the back, feeling dead inside.

But, in all reality, I was happily alive!

 

A psychic vampire and her helpless victim, together again.

My heartless powers I have finally regained from them.

A freedom is lost, while mine has been found;

The lost is carelessly--painfully!-- pierced to the ground!

 

I am fully aware of the infinite spiral of his heartache;

He wanders in the loveless path he is forced to take.

Ah, how regret can poison the boy's feeble soul--

Oh, why worry when my strengths have finally become whole?

 

I am back with the familiar beating I call Life,

While the well-being of another shall be taken by the knife--

The very same that's been used before my eyes,

Which will be the tool of a merciless suicide.

 

So, as I allow vengeance and its pleasures to slowly pass me by,

I will always remember, one day, we will all die!

Die! From the intake of our last, unwelcoming breath

That I know... damn well... will be our unspeakable... all-powerful... DEATH.


© 2009 Blade & Blood (The Black Plague)



Author's Note

Blade & Blood (The Black Plague)
Now, that I read this thoroughly, I see a resemblence to a previous poem of mine: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Jasmine/172264/

My God, has my style changed...

Anyways, first loves suck, but you have no choice in remembering them. Painful memories are a given, but learning from them is the reward.

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wow amazing definitly keep on making your art work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


wow very deep and dark
i really like this piece and your work in general
keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really loved it~

Posted 8 Years Ago


I loved this poem. And yes first loves do suck. I thought this piece was well written and very beautiful. I can relate to this poem, like many other people. Keep on writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Yea it sucks remembering hard things like that. It was a very good peice I liked the way you expressed your feelings.

Posted 8 Years Ago


a very valuable reward i must say.
darkness seems to surround your writing. and yet it fits so well. you have a very angry, fearful scream of pain combined with a sobbing, childlike sadness. good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Yes, remembering them are real painful... They are remembered because we need not to repeat the same mistakes... Also, that's the true defintions of "invisible scars" where no one will see them except for those who still feel them...

I agree that your style had changed a bit... but it changed for better, so no worries...

Overall, it's still a great write and I'm not expecting you to keep on writing, just hoping you would keep going...


Posted 8 Years Ago


Very dark...but I guess that's expected. I've seen other break-up poems before, and at least yours doesn't rant and doesn't thoroughly insult the person like all the others. And I'm glad you have the sight to see the reward :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


it can go both ways on a first love...
my tale is more like Romeo and Juliet....
and i think she is the "one that got away"

but my fave cantos is the last one


Posted 8 Years Ago



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