Spilling Glass Tears of the Ultimate
A Poem by
NightShade
Unexpected Transmutations of my Big Toe!
Melted wall mirrors form liquid reflections spilling streams of abrasion on beaches Foaming under pressure the tides ebb and flow A sparrows tail can be grasped like a lion teasing spheres or parting a wild horses mane as one presses mountainous forms For I examine magic needles picked up from seabed basements and flap like white storks reeling the Emperor's silk Strike the tiger and yield glorious flight; whipping the Earth lustily for the pallid serpent to slither on Hands ripple like clouds and take the Papal Bull by the horns descending like dragons whose tongues stab the sun The Regal monkey may be repulsed by dire strumming of untuned guitars Never fret though. Just catch avian Spirits and gently release spears Bloodstained palms reveal the Phoenix who rises and pushes us to carry that wounded tiger back up the mountain We sweep up the dust of our travels to and fro and breathe the eternal cycles of all Men in Heaven and Earth
© 2011 NightShade
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I had to take my time with this one, and let the images slowly ooze and sink into my mind, to take root and form lives of their own there. When they did, the picture was so beautiful, I sat staring at your words long after I had read them. To me this speaks of timeless transitions and transformation, of the recognitions of the self that go beyond form and linear ways of thinking (and acting!). If this makes no sense, it probably makes no sense, ha ha! But, in plain English, I shall also not be afraid to say: WOW.
Posted 1 Year Ago
JUST HAPPEN TO STUMBLE ACROSS UR PAGE. WOW. VERY WELL WRITTEN, YOU PAINT SUCH A PICTURE. THIS IS A GRRRREAT PIECE!
Posted 1 Year Ago
JUST HAPPEN TO STUMBLE ACROSS UR PAGE. WOW. VERY WELL WRITTEN, YOU PAINT SUCH A PICTURE. THIS IS A GRRRREAT PIECE!
Wow such a intrguing piece here and powerful.
I really enjoyed this, the imagery was wonderful.
Posted 1 Year Ago
Wow such a intrguing piece here and powerful.
I really enjoyed this, the imagery was wonderful.
How true--as soon as one cycles seems to end, it's really just the start of another one. And no matter how much we learn from history, history will repeat itself. The more things change, the more they stay the same. All the great revolutionary ideas, inventions and methods of our times are really old ones given new clothes. In man and nature.
Posted 1 Year Ago
How true--as soon as one cycles seems to end, it's really just the start of another one. And no matter how much we learn from history, history will repeat itself. The more things change, the more they stay the same. All the great revolutionary ideas, inventions and methods of our times are really old ones given new clothes. In man and nature.
Brilliant piece. loved it.
Posted 1 Year Ago
Brilliant piece. loved it.
Such amazing metaphors and the imagery created is absolutely amazing! I love it! Good job!
Posted 1 Year Ago
Such amazing metaphors and the imagery created is absolutely amazing! I love it! Good job!
Very unique imagery, I like it.
♥ Ta'Shandra
Posted 1 Year Ago
Very unique imagery, I like it.
♥ Ta'Shandra
Very unique imagery...You wrote each and every line so well...Great poem... :)))
Posted 1 Year Ago
Very unique imagery...You wrote each and every line so well...Great poem... :)))
FOR ME, this poem associates erotic and kinkiness :)
Posted 1 Year Ago
FOR ME, this poem associates erotic and kinkiness :)
Nicely written, I love the mental image it puts in my head. I like how you ended it, but it is nicely penned too. Keep writing! :)
Posted 1 Year Ago
Nicely written, I love the mental image it puts in my head. I like how you ended it, but it is nicely penned too. Keep writing! :)
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Added on August 22, 2011
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NightShade Los Angeles, CA
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