Demons

Do You Have Them?

"Stand With Grief And Bleed The Moon.

 Rip It Apart And Scream To See Me Soon.

 Wrap Your Arms Around My Gravestone.

 Now You Can Feel Me Cold And Alone.

 Only If You Can Stay To Whisper Briefly. 

 I Kept Telling You To Stop Living In Misery.

  And I Can Still Feel Them Fall From You To Me.

 Tears Of Sadness That Claim My Soul As A Trophy.

 

 I Can Still Feel Your Crying Heart.

 I Was At Fault That We Are Torn Apart.

 I'm To Blame I Didn't Give You The Last Kiss.

 I Didn't Even Say Goodbye Now I'm The One In Bliss. 

 Hold Me Close And Let My Soul Defrost. 

 Help Me Through My Darkness At Any Cost.

 Now I Can Feel My Chilling Heart Exhaust.

 If Need Be Hold My Soul Or Let It Be Lost.

 I Pushed Through My Own Ruins With Dark Visions.

 You Must Be Stronger Than Yesterday As The World Syphons.

 Eating Away At Your Mind And Devouring Your Soul As It Worsens.

 But We Must Keep Fighting For Everyone Has Their Own Demons."

 

 

 

Reviews

[Natasha]

i liked that you used rhyming and it didn't seem forced, really well written as usual. i REALLY like the line "stand with grief and bleed the moon"--so powerful!

[Laura Storm]

Wow. Not a style I normally read, but I love this piece. I love the line "If Need Be Hold My Soul Or Let It Be Lost." Just wow.

[Mrsnyums]

Woah! What an incredibly powerful poem. It has a really strong emotional center and your rhyming is clever. Some really unique use of words that show a real depth. Great writing. I really like it. I especially love the first line, and the third and fourth lines of the second stanza.

[kirsten]

This kind of gave me chills, Amazing.

[Sleeping Maiden]

This is magnificient! Such power to your words.. im blown away. Incredible..
Hmm it also reminded me of death of how i had to deal with.. a few days ago..
It hurts having demons inside.. they know how to drive you to jump.. to really hurt yourself.. and not having a care to anyone around you. I know how that's like..
I haven't been over it.. due to my own struggles with my own problems.. but this is really one of your best! I loved it. So dark.. painful.. and melancholic...
such as a soul reaped in darkness.. it would find a way to fight for something.. a reason.. to love. ^^

[Chris]

It has the sound, feel, power, and strength of exceptional. Well done.

[None]

This is really good. I feel like there are a few applications of the idea of a demon here, and your rhyming scheme works very well. I find myself driven y it towards the end of every sentence, which enhances the whole demon theme. Great wrk.

[quarintine_deathangel]

Your style is held very well throughout all your poems, something kind of rare in writers. You also keep and unfathomable approach where the reader is alone but has help reaching in all directions yet they never grasp an outreached hand since it's nonexistant to them. It's deep and creative. Definantly a good example of your talent as a writer.

[PorcelainDolly28]

Your writing is so darkly elegant. Makes me wonder why there are people like you with no famous poems out there somewhere. Damn sight better than some poets I've read that are published.