Girl

Went for a ride
on my new superbike !
two gears up !
vrooooom like a tide

its sunny its noon
I gotta girl on my side
she looks beautiful
she looks ugly
depends on our fight

we stopped at gelato
my girls a mulatto
but she aint a bad chick
when she is on her stiletto

dropped her home
took a promise
we meet again tomorrow?
and shared a kiss

Reviews

[John Anderson]

This is an extraordinary piece! Excellent flow

[Jas_I_M]

Thank you john ! Means alot !
I would be glad if you review my new poem "friends"
Thanks once again !
God bless

[Gurleen Saluja]

A good and simple write. :)

[Jas_I_M]

Thank you gurleen ! Glad you liked it
I'l be honoured if you review my new poem "friends"
read moreThank you gurleen ! Glad you liked it
I'l be honoured if you review my new poem "friends"
Thanks once again
God bless

[Gurleen Saluja]

You Are welcome.. I'd review it shortly.. :)

[AKMaleeke]

Fun writing and straight to point. I would like have seen more details. Overall good read and look forward to reading/reviewing more.

[Girl With A Pen]

Very interesting! I like it a lot. I could not stop reading it since the first word. Your words just flowed!

[Jas_I_M]

Thanks Angela ! Means a lot
Improving !!
I love your writings too
Fan of your poems

[Manuel A Hurtado]

"its sunny its noon
I gotta girl on my side
she looks beautiful
she looks ugly
depends on our fight "
Haha, very humorous poem.

[Jas_I_M]

Thanks for the review sir ! I would like you to review my poem "Thinking?"
thanks once again