On a hot date

On a hot date

A Poem by Jas_I_M

It was 7 in the evening
I dressed up as a king
picked car keys took my wallet
being anti-frolic I carried that thing

Imma going on a hot date
a cup of coffee to get laid
Have that thing in my pocket
"carry the packet ? you gonna rock it"

said this to myself atleast thousand times by now
what am I gonna ask her?
I don't know how !

the night is busy the crowd is walking
the people are laughing the world is talking
heartbeats pumping the kid in me is jumping

Parked the car near her door
Rings the doorbell and
I fear more !
there is this gorgeous girl in front of me
the man of her dreams feels great to be

adjusted the slouch
sat on the couch
turned into the cutest lad
from an evil tempered grouch

I had no clue
it was all new
I took her hands into mine
and asked ! are we gonna do?

she smiled and walked away
i followed her all the way
she turned back and said
Baby are you mad ?

Pulled her close into my arms
the quietest emotions became wildest storms

she made the night turn dark blue!
whispered into her ears
"listen I love you"

© 2014 Jas_I_M


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How lovely and sweet.



Nice work here.


I loved these lines.


Pulled her close into my arms
the quietest emotions became wildest storms

she made the night turn dark blue!
whispered into her ears
"listen I love you"

Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jas_I_M

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much !
I would like you to review my poem "Friends"
A very different writi.. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

You're very welcome. it's my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet
'being anti-frolic' lol, i love that! so lovely.

Posted 9 Years Ago


wowwww...this was amazing....I simplyy loved it..
Awesome...how you ended it was just perfect! Cheers! :)


Posted 9 Years Ago


Jas_I_M

9 Years Ago

Thank you ! Means a lot :)
Yep, I would say that was a "hot" date, and anytime you get the night to turn blue for you I was venture to say, that was a super hot date. You betcha.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jas_I_M

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your valuable review !
I would like you to review my poem "Thinking?"
Tha.. read more

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Added on June 5, 2014
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Tags: Boy, Girl, Romance, teenage, humor

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Jas_I_M

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