Inside ME

Inside me lies these things

 

Indignation,

 

Envy,

 

 Disgust,

 

 Rage, Hate, Remorse,

 

 Contempt,

 

 Dispair,

 

 Sadness,

 

 Regret,

 

 Lust,

 

 Hate,

 

 Fury,

 

 Resentment,

 

 Loathing,

 

 Revulsion,

 

 Pride,

 

 Bitterness,

 

 But its acceptance that I most despise.

 

Reviews

[deleted]

Its amazing how little words or lines can mean so much. It came out really good. (: you should write more.

[Sincerely, Sofia]

This is a really wonderful piece. Simply, yet used with powerful words.

[Michael Anyanwu]

Adam, it's been a long time since I've paid the Cafe a visit. I am glad to see that you're still dropping really good work that inspires introspective thought and much self-examination.

Thanks for keeping it real.

I think I'm going to enjoy the long road back.

[East of Eden]

Great in it's simplicity and honesty. It's insight into your character. Acceptance is for the apathetic. Let Indignation, Envy,Disgust,Rage, Hate, Remorse,Contempt,Dispair,Sadness,Regret, Lust, Hate, Fury, Resentment, Loathing,Revulsion, Pride and Bitterness be found long before apathy! Good work.

[Bill Grimes Jr.]

Clever and thought provoking Adam.........I read it twice to get the full gist.........well done my friend....

Peace,

Bill