Sea of Faces

Sea of Faces

A Poem by JP142000

Time and time again I hear you call
I look to find no one there
I watch the clock and hear the tick
And yet I get no where
I stand in a room of many
Yet every face is you

The fear, pain, hurt, and trade was all I ever knew
Its all you ever taught me
Its all I knew to do

I played the role I asigned
Asigned to me by you
Then one day I forgot my lines and disappointed you

You left me there with no one
With nothing
With nothing but the truth
A truth I thought of night and day which took the place of you

Now im here at your request in this very crowded room
Sea of faces around me still
And all i see it you


© 2015 JP142000



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JP142000
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Another interesting experiment JP142000. cOOL.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Just for the rating. The other reviews don't have any

Posted 10 Months Ago


I could sense it. It takes bravery to put that up. Very Well done.

Posted 10 Months Ago


May i ask if this poem stems from personal experience?


Posted 10 Months Ago


JP142000

10 Months Ago

Yes it does
again an amazing work.....lovely work keep going girl....

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JP142000

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much glad u liked it
Wow, this person is very lucky to have such loyalty, I hope that
is realized! Nice piece and great flow, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JP142000

10 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and glad u liked

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A Poem by JP142000