Whispers

Whispers

A Poem by JayceeC
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Fibonacci

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Warm
Breath
Covers
Milky skin
Warming me inside
Suffusing my body with joy.
Every cell reaches toward you and shivers in glee.
Anticipation knows no bounds as you whisper across my skin and desire ignites.

© 2015 JayceeC



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"Whisper accross my skin", wonderful. This style really suits you.

Posted 3 Years Ago


JayceeC

3 Years Ago

Thought you might like that after looking at Auditory..LOL :-)
Actually my brain seems able t.. read more
Nice use of words. A nice journey in your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


JayceeC

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Coyote
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome.
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Whoa, great work! You manage to capture every sensual aspect of a sexual act during each beautiful step. Fantastic job.

- Brittney

Posted 3 Years Ago


JayceeC

3 Years Ago

Thanks Brittney! This is a newer form for me
613

3 Years Ago

You're welcome! You did a great job.
great tease..........
extremely sensual........
amazing as always!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


JayceeC

3 Years Ago

Thanks P. Always like yo see you here. You day the nicest things
Pushkar Prabhat

3 Years Ago

WoW!!!...........you are welcome.............well i am amazing!!! lol :D :D
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Jaycee, this is beautifully sensual poetry :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


JayceeC

3 Years Ago

Thamk you lynn
excellent penning...the shape adds to the understand of touch moving across flesh...well done...

Posted 3 Years Ago


JayceeC

3 Years Ago

Thanks...This will not be the last I pen in this form.
Reading through it, I can picture this situation with my man and how he does this with me sometimes. I'm now sitting at work a little turned on because of the memory you brought to my mind lol. Thanks for that ;P I love the format though; starts out with one word and branches out as desire intensifies. A wonderfully worded and constructed poem. Thank you for sharing this with me! :) You're an inspiration :D

Posted 3 Years Ago


JayceeC

3 Years Ago

LOL you should always beware when you come to my page at work...although this is definitely on the m.. read more
RiverRei

3 Years Ago

I know how you feel, it took me a long time to get used to the fact my lines aren't always going to .. read more
I love this. Simple, short, and sexy. I think the tease of knowing what's coming but never really getting there and still knowing the getting there was totally worth it, is fun and it's what you've done here. Additionally, great use of the Fibonacci format. :) Me likes.

Posted 3 Years Ago


JayceeC

3 Years Ago

Thanks BTB. By now you should know I think a little bit of mystery or imagination is a lot sexier th.. read more
BougaTimeBongo

3 Years Ago

Absolutely!
What a sexy write :) Loved it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


JayceeC

3 Years Ago

Thanks Aaron {:-)
The warm breath of life can be so sensual. Breathing life into each other.

Bruce

PS: Intriguing that your syllable count is a Fibonacci sequence. Leave it to a teacher to put on such displays.

Posted 3 Years Ago


JayceeC

3 Years Ago

Well math teacher at that...lol. Really just trying to expand my repertoire and this looked easier t.. read more
Elan Vital 23

3 Years Ago

Yes so many things in nature reflect Fibonacci.

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