?

 

Does the possession of knowledge legitimise action through deliberation

Does the action undertaken warrant the course

Does the course present a definitive sense of thought and response

 

An unnerving habit of question each material in the fabric presented before us

lurches through the bones of every thought

Staring at a single half an arm’s length away, slowly examining every quaint movement

through the air simply ads to the anxiety felt by this isolation

 

This isolation of simple questions with excruciatingly painful answers

The pain of doubt shrouded by an essence of infinity that truth and experience

is as mythical as strange beats representing a wider berths of adversity and symbolism

of the relentless quest for meaning

 

The sheer relativity provides a disillusioned insight into the ignorance of ‘knowing’

provides notion more than the mundane existence  of all, as the embarrassment of mistake

is a personal Pandora’s box which inflicts terror through misunderstanding

 

What proof is there that a heartbeat can be felt; a dream isn’t reality and that existence itself

Is nothing more than sensory shambles

Question everything... Why?

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

We keepsearching for answers. Some find it , some don't ...A splendid read and write...:)

[Dye]

"Question everything... Why?"

The 'why' will just lead to more questions. It's easy to answer the 'how'.

Very thought provoking.

[MoriartyMesa]

A better man than me once said, "2+2=4" 1984

[Muse]

I fear the day humanity stops questioning the world around them. It is this questioning that drives us for a solution and an answer.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Dreams are tangible, you just need to let yourself believe...
This is an array of thought provoking emotions.... self doubt, or the cynical thoughts of our existence...

I felt as if I were in the maze of your mind... deciphering each line took me to another realm of thinking...
Thanks for keeping me on my toes, dear Jayren... you always have! ~xoxo~:)

Well penned!

[Coyote Poetry]

"What proof is there that a heartbeat can be felt; a dream isn’t reality and that existence itself
Is nothing more than sensory shambles"
Many good questions brought to life in the poem. I believe dreams are important. Tell us to go forward or slow down. The more we live. More questions will come to life. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Timothy Burjess]

I'd imagine my friend, that these are thoughts that never cease, that continuum of a mindset that once uncovered and can never be repressed again. I thank everybody that has the ability to write down thoughts like these, for they are the nascent of new ideologies and knowledge, so, thank you Jayren. This was exactly what I was hoping to read this morning, I simply could not be happier reading this, especially with my cup of beneficial green tea and opposing cigarette in hand.

This piece is beautifully structured, one gets a sense of curious premonition when reading the first stanza due to the coming five, this also promotes intense reading; of course an important aspect when reading writing like this.

You write in a way which is oh so fascinating, the second stanza is rather powerful I must say, '...lurches through the bones of every thought' - descriptive enough to visualize something which shouldn't otherwise be possible, great work my friend.

Stanza three is like an internal struggle to understand the complexity of all, the first two lines are especially divine, that feeling an advancing mind is forced to endure when it's understood that 'every action has a reaction'...excuse me.

From Newton to Einstein, this stanza is by far the most enthralling and important. The pure genius here can be described as no other, simply using the word of relativity gives the reader a chance to laugh at the end if they understand the wit of it! Pristine work!

Thank you ever so much for this piece!

I shall be reading more, 'tis a promise.