Why Nothing Has Prevailed

Wrote this in a complete breakdown, so I decided to write but I didn't rele know what I was writing until I finished it. This was enspierd b my own tears.

I feel so down-hearted as I'm yet

to have a relationship and I feel like

it's my own fault, but changing the matter

feels like the elusive cure to cancer.

 

I have this one glimmer of hope, one person

who would terminate my loneliness and

kill all former doubt and problems which are

under constant employment to disrupt my

subconscious thoughts, but that has a wait

worthy of the word longevity and as each

moment passes I draw ever closer to that

language your heart speaks......

 

Love

 

Not one woman, not one, and it causes pain

whenever I repeat it because I have potential

but that can't be expressed because I'm never

gonna find her if it's not the person I want more

than anyone can't see the future I can see despite

the possibility of me being blinded from the rest

of the intamacy constituency.

 

So I might just let the empty space inside of me

remain an empty space, because my attempts feel

like prophesied failures.

 

So pass the quill with blood for ink

so I can sign my name on the entry slip

for the club of eternal lonely hearts.

Reviews

[$êlvån]

Gr8 one...

[Red Brick Keshner]

I am enjoying how you are using line breaks and stanzas to push for dramatic effect and pauses in your poetry.