Winter sunshine

Came up with this in school, when we had to combine the two wordsn together and this is wha I got.

Winter sunshine can't explained my

love because no one I physically know

can tell me the very sanctity of that

very word.

 

Explain to me beauty please...

 

What is beauty, is it hypnotism or

generosity?

 

Thump! I wake from falling into

a dreamt black hole and all I can see is

your exquisite face and that smile

beyond all and as my fall comes to

a sudden halt, I wake and smile myself.

 

I hope I never have to question

anything about you because to me

you're the closest thing to perfection.

 

Because you are my winter sunshine.

Reviews

[Marie]

Winter sunshine is an evocative phrase...a smile like winter sunshine would be beautiful.

[Forest Green]

Nicely written; truly inspirational write.

Enjoyed it...especially the final line...perfect!

[Artiste de Mots]

Beautiful! I adore the unique, mystical description of the poem. Wonderful work! :D