Apathetic Dream

Complete apathy... becomes a nightmare.

So nothing really matters
Sweet love for life is gone
When your going nowhere quickly
Emotions are unseen
Fallen sadly and patheticly
In your apathetic dream
You watch the others happiness
Grief will not be shown
Lost in your indifference
Forever set in stone
You drifted away from all you knew
Your life is always dark
Voiceless and empty
You've lost the will to talk
Emotionless brutality
You wished for it to change
But nothing ever happens
In your apathetic dream
Silent and careless
Does your heart beat anymore
Will you fall to your knees and sob
Laugh with such a joy
Hatred bottled up explodes
Pain and suffering for all
Or will you continue with this misery
Never love nor peace
Living life so aimlessly
In you apathetic dream.

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

truly the opposite of love is not hate, but apathy. Well written.

[Aiza]

i can really feel the emotion put into this. i love the wording, the style, and how it all flows together.
this is definitely one of my favorite lines:

"You watch the others happiness
Grief will not be shown
Lost in your indifference
Forever set in stone"

Very nice =]