I Love You More

It's such a strange word 

the word of love

and you have to admit

sometimes you want to be above

the fact that there's one someone

might be a problem

especially if soon they're not

then you will have fallen

Do you ever feel alone

I think we all do

we may need someone

when were down in the blue

that's my only wish

for someone to be there

but not just anyone 

someone who really cares

I wish someone could be there

I wish someone could say

I love you more than Jack loved Rose

I love you everyday

even though that will never happen

I guess I can still dream

finding someone to love

is harder than it seems

I wish someone could explain

I wish someone could feel

I love you more than Prince loved Cinderella

that will be a deal

even though this will never happen

I guess I can ideate

someone who really loved me

would say I'll wait

I wish someone could admit

I wish someone could tell

I love you more than Edward loved Bella

this time I really fell

even though this will never happen

I guess I can still wish

every chance we get to be together

I will never miss

I wish someone could express

I wish someone could state

I love you more than Noah loved Allie

this all feels like fate

even though this will never happen

I guess I can imagine

someone actually feeling

that I am their passion

I wish someone could inform 

I wish someone could aware

I love you more than Aladdin loved Jasmine

you'll always be in my care

Even though this will never happen

I guess I can act

that someone could actually

love me for a fact

 

Reviews

[Stefanie Holmes]

I really liked this piece a lot Jazmine! You can tell you poured a lot of heart and soul into this!

~Stefanie

[Jazmine Devine]

Thanks, Stefanie!!!

[A. Amos]

I truly admire such a amazing write, the whole details and messages were powerful...epic?

[Jazmine Devine]

Thank you!