For the Wind

I made a sad piano song last year. It's so messed up; in a good way. I think

Dear wind, take care of all of my secrets. When I cannot breathe, please hold them, please carry me.

I'm nothing strong; a mist, a shadow, a bird that flies away and is never seen.

Faithful wind, you've been with me. My heart you love. Let me lay my head one more time; I need you near.

I'm nothing special; a grey sky, a stone, a flower that blooms and falls apart.

Patient wind, take care of all of my wishes. These are not much, but don't whisper them away.

My old friend, how long will I see behind my thoughts, behind a window shut 

at life and beauty, at love and freedom?

Because I haven't really learned what something means when I feel lost.

Dear wind, that song that bring me hope, sing it soft. It is then I know that there's more in this world

than the things in this dark room and someone who will love them more than you.

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Me likes it I can picture how it might sound with a piano playing and stuff...I think it would be slow and perhaps a little eerie yet still purty ^^ lol I liked how you described how you felt I think those are my favorite parts, the lines "I'm nothing strong; a mist, a shadow, a bird that flies away and is never seen." and "I'm nothing special; a grey sky, a stone, a flower that blooms and falls apart." I think everyone feels like this from time to time and just need someone to remind them that there is something more waiting for you and such.

Good Job

[Jazmin-Ruby]

Thank you so much! Your encouragement means a lot.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're welcome ^^