First Love

First Love

A Poem by simpleromantic
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Love

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The first time I saw you,
My world go round.
Because of your existence,
My life turns into a hunting ground.

But the moment you distant,
My heaven turns to torment.
Now, without of your extant,
I’ll be better like flat.

I feel like I’m an equation,
That can never be likened.
Neither be factored nor expand,
Because of my numbers can’t be found.
  
You’re like a seraph,
That lives in my reverie.
To neither be caress nor perceive.
All I can do is to stir in my fantasy.
  
I know you can’t ever be with me,
And maybe I’ll be seemed like a fool.
But I’ll still ardor you,
‘Coz you’re my bliss and my vitality.

© 2017 simpleromantic



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wow I really loved this poem! i loved on how you flow them all out beautifully and I'm in love with the fourth stanza, it's perfect.

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simpleromantic

8 Months Ago

Thank you.

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simpleromantic

Manila, NCR, Philippines



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I find myself happy w/the simple things. Appreciating the blessings that God gave me. I take a lot of pride in being myself. And I do forgive but I can't forget. more..

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