Inspiration

We all have our own aspirations

But none of them are able to come true without inspiration

Something intrudes our mind, our very spirit, that aggressively motivates our actions

Lately, I find that it's you that penetrates my membrane and removes some of the cobwebs that Black Widow left inside my mind

Some say my writing is sagacious

But, to me, those claims are outrageous

It's just the inspiration you instill in me

Not just the thoughts of we and meant to be's

You make the gray from my skies fade

Replaced by vivid, opulent pastels...the sorrow committed suicide

Leaving only hope and joy, what a superior trade

You are helping my dreams become realized

Suddenly the intangible rewards have materialized

I am starting to feel big

Not big as in weight or size...but colossal

As if every piece I write is essential and monumental

I only hope that this euphoric feeling will remain

And to take each praise as if it was a grain

 

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. every person truly needs some form of inspiration from day to day.. a hug.. a kiss.. music.. favorite pasttimes.. spending time with the people we love! Here you speak of someone who judging by the amount of writings you have written (I am presuming they are for the same person) who clearly you have fallen for. What a wonderful feeling it is to first find love.. untarnished.. lifting.. do what you can to keep it as polished and fruitful as possible. I loved this as many of your other pieces.. you have a real fire in your writing.. very profound and inspirational in itself!

[Sarah]

ummm just so you people know..he's my hun..not yours...so stfu :)

[Sarah]

amziinngggg

[Angelwithabeard]

nice, very meaning full. seems to me that its inspiring. very nice.

[Just Plain Me]

This is...wow. I love it! Great job

[Alexandria]

omg hun, that is so wicked good, i can like feel your inspiration in this peice, amazing work keep wrighting hun and thank you for your review on mines.

[Sarah]

put this one in the book

[Skyman]

AWESOME SAUCE

[CircusNerd]

wow. this is just plain awe inspiring. my favorite line had to be: Some say my writing is sagacious
But, to me, those claims are outrageous. that line just has so much truth to it, and i'm sure that every writer here can relate to it. thanks for the great inspiration :) fantastic poem [:

[Tina Kline]

What a beautiful poem about being inspired by someone, having such wonderful
words come from wonderful feelings.
Good rhyming. Very well written!