Sonnet 4

This sonnet is my first attempt to follow a rhyme scheme. Let me know what you think.

 

I see you from across the room

It is impossible not to stare

For your beauty is greater than roses in bloom

Your supple skin is so fair

Your stunning eyes are brown

You seem to always smile

Very rarely does your face frown

I’m in love with you, even though I’m in denial

You’re the perfect height

You have amazing style

You have no reason to be contrite

Just looking at you drives my wild

All this evidence provides a clear verdict

In my eyes you are perfect

Reviews

[Sarah]

pshh your more perfect

[Sarah]

haha! my favorite! lol! hi !

[Sarah]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEE

[Mistaken]

AWWWWW I love it Jeff!

[deeps]

Such a wonderful and beautiful write.