When We Fight

When We Fight

A Poem by Jeff Miller

I hate it when we fight

When we fight nothing seems right

I can’t stay mad at you though

Because without you I’m a river that doesn’t flow

I just become stagnant

But when I’m with you I am magnificent

So let’s keep pushing through these hard times

Because I want you to always be mine

There is no doubt in my mind

That you are THE ONE I was meant to find

Baby you are my everything

And, yes, that does make everyone else nothing

All I need is you

Because when I don’t have you my soul is blue

Even when we fight I still wanna marry you

Because my emotions mean so much more than I love you

© 2010 Jeff Miller

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Posted 4 Years Ago

A very tender poem. Just because we fight with those we love doesn't mean we don't love them. We can only try and hope we don't go to far when fighting. Hurt goes both ways. Nicely done.

Posted 4 Years Ago

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i hate it when we fight too :( lol good thing they only last like 5 minutes

Posted 4 Years Ago

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Ah! This is so wonderful, sincere and ever so beuatiful. I like this write alot. Wonderful flow and rhyme scheme.

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Added on February 21, 2010
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Jeff Miller
Jeff Miller

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I'm 23 years old, married to Sarah for 3 years, and have one puppy. We just had our first angel, Audrey. I love literature and music. My wife was my biggest inspiration, the reason for over 100 pieces.. more..


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