The Sea

There's a line in the river

Where two souls meet

Where vivid pictures

Lay behind my eyes

A strong current pulling me

Into the unknown sea

I feel a kiss on my lips

The flavor of a kindred soul

Sets my mind at ease

A place where two angels

Become one soul

Blessed with the truth

Let's swim in the sea

Glide in the current

Connect on every level

Go to a place

Where two waters

Join into the sea

Reviews

[Bronwen Cox Hollinger]

Beautifully done.

[Jeff]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

A place where two angels
Become one soul.
A nice write.

[sid_yadav]

I like this poem, the way you have brought the two together, it's great and a real sentiment we all feel...great write!!

[M.M.I]

I didn't think much of this poem until the last stanza which fused the poem together and made it whole. I appreciate this sentiment wholeheartedly. Everybody is searching for that other line. Nice job, Jeff.

[ALIEAH ROSE...]

THIS IS SORT...
BUT...
IT HOLDS YOU...
LONG AFTER YOU'RE...
DONE READING IT...
THANKS FOR SHARING...

[Gomer LePoet]

The sea! what more natural place for two souls to touch and join. nice work Jeff.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Powerfully inept and screams to the reader to not forget the simpicity and delicacy of life itself, well done, a great read.

[Craig Froman]

There is no richer, more beautiful blessing than that of two lives merging into one.. You sing this song from a wondrous experience..

[PoppySilver]

Water is a powerful medium for connection and emotion, gloriously worded love xx

[Perception Shapes Poetr..]

two magnetic and longing hearts meet their attraction in a vast body of water and create waves - beautiful