Sweet Descent

If it's utterly unavoidable... (In Haiku).

If I have to fall,
let it be into your arms,
where I long to lay.

Author's Note

My first Haiku in 5 years...
Oh, my.

Reviews

[Jeanie O'brien]

really a good one , lots of feeling i think you got it down

[Cristal Reviewess]

Awwwwww
its sweet

[Emeranie Ly]

Well said, I love it!

[Michael]

Forgive my ignorance, but what is a "Haiku"?

[Windy]

Perfect! Haiku and all. :) Windy

[Vincent Weathers]

I would definitely say that this is straight to the point. I also haven't seen Haiku's in such a long time... maybe I should try it... after I see others. I guess you started something here.

I like it.

[cmaynard]

Indeed I like it, I haven't created a haiku for many a year also. After ready this though I am compelled to go write one.... nicely done....

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Wonderful Raya !

I love it , please write more Yos