Love letter to a vampire

Love letter to a vampire

A Poem by JenLyn

To my beloved leech,

 

My heart is yours take it!

 

I’ll follow you in the shadows.

 

I’ll hide with you in the sun.

 

Our immortal love is more than enough.

 

Each time I see your lips drip with blood,

 

I long to feel your icy, passionate touch.

 

Ah, pangs of joy and lust.

 

I need to have you, I must!

 

Crimson to crimson, skin to skin, fangs to lips

 

You’re my only weakness.

 

My dreams are made of this!

 

You’re a twisted angel, wicked, wild and free.

 

But you’re always sweet to me.

 

The caress of your deceased lips drew me in.

 

That night I became a part of you.

 

Why can’t we try it again?

 

Breathe the beauty of us into each other.

 

Caresses, kisses on pale supple skin, fangs to lips

 

Ah, just let the weakness in.

 

Oh, the bloodlust is too much.

 

I boil with ecstasy with each accidental touch.

 

There’s no reason to be afraid.

 

Our hearts aren’t beating so there’s nothing to break,

 

You know that it should be just you and me.

 

Spending eternity on earth, side by side.

 

Not struggling to live, or afraid to die.

 

What I’m saying is…

 

I’ll be your vampire if you’ll be mine?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2010 JenLyn



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You were right.. You knew I'd like this..and you were right. It's awesome!! I absolutely love the phrase "You're my only weakness".. It shows such strength of the character to admit such a thing.. You write so beautifully. Your words are filled with emotion and passion. I love reading something like this and feeling such a need to read it again just for the feelings that are held within. Great job once again Jennifer. You amaze me each time I read something you have written. Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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A interesting poem. A love story.
"Not struggling to live, or afraid to die.
What I’m saying is…
I’ll be your vampire if you’ll be mine?"
A vampire life is a long one. Chose well. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 1 Year Ago


Our hearts aren’t beating so there’s nothing to break.... I think one of the best lines in the poem. I absolutely loved this poem. Silere is right in everything he said. Your words are filled with intense passion and made me want to read it again.

Posted 7 Years Ago


You were right.. You knew I'd like this..and you were right. It's awesome!! I absolutely love the phrase "You're my only weakness".. It shows such strength of the character to admit such a thing.. You write so beautifully. Your words are filled with emotion and passion. I love reading something like this and feeling such a need to read it again just for the feelings that are held within. Great job once again Jennifer. You amaze me each time I read something you have written. Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it, well written and has a nice flow to it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love vampire poems. I love vampires in general. Thanks for sharing. :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


the imagery in this piece is stunning!!! I like to read them out loud to really get the feet for the poem and that one is great.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very awesome. The picture you paint with your words is so vivid, I can see every detail in my head.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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