Love letter to a vampire

My heart is yours take it please.
You’re my shelter during the hours of shadow.

Your immortal love and eyes of blood,
I long to feel your cold, passionate touch.

It pangs me with fright and delight.

My crimson you crave, though my soul you'd save.

I know of the passion you grasp for me.

You're my fallen angel, a star in the darkest sky.

Your undead kiss makes me want to die!

I beg you, take my life!

Breathe the beauty of you into me!

I desire your essence.

You desire mine too!

This blood lust is too much.

Mine boils each time we touch.

You know we should be,
Just spending eternity on earth, side by side.

Not struggling to live or afraid to die.

Just you and I.

What I'm trying to say is...
I'll be your vampire, if you'll be mine?

© JB 2008

Reviews

[Silere]

You were right.. You knew I'd like this..and you were right. It's awesome!! I absolutely love the phrase "You're my only weakness".. It shows such strength of the character to admit such a thing.. You write so beautifully. Your words are filled with emotion and passion. I love reading something like this and feeling such a need to read it again just for the feelings that are held within. Great job once again Jennifer. You amaze me each time I read something you have written. Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. A love story.
"Not struggling to live, or afraid to die.
What I’m saying is…
I’ll be your vampire if you’ll be mine?"
A vampire life is a long one. Chose well. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Scarlet Pulse]

Our hearts aren’t beating so there’s nothing to break.... I think one of the best lines in the poem. I absolutely loved this poem. Silere is right in everything he said. Your words are filled with intense passion and made me want to read it again.

[Katie L]

love it, well written and has a nice flow to it.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I love vampire poems. I love vampires in general. Thanks for sharing. :D

[Frantzuu]

the imagery in this piece is stunning!!! I like to read them out loud to really get the feet for the poem and that one is great.

[E.j.aka.Hannah]

Very awesome. The picture you paint with your words is so vivid, I can see every detail in my head.