Selling myself

'Stairway To Heaven' booming out on the radio as I read your poem, which I found a very visual read, a bit like watching a video accompanyment to a famous bit of music. '...everything I love is free' is a lovely thought and full of truth. The second verse is delightful. OK I know you are not going to stick your hands on hot-plates, but the notion of drawing something positive from a mishap, or pain is a good way to be, especially as the world is an imperfect place. I am sure there will be no shortage of buyers for such sheer love of life.

Posted 1 Year Ago

Very nicely penned. It is so great to see young ladies who know themselves so well and have peace of mind. I can almost see this put to music. Great job!

Posted 10 Months Ago

very well written and i loved the title... very different outlook.. :)

Regards,
Poetic Soul

Posted 1 Year Ago

This poem is nice. I liked the second stanza best. Its good to be carefree, you know? Life is too short for any other arrangement.

Posted 1 Year Ago

Loved the poem, and like people who aren't afraid to tell it like it is. Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago

Seems to me your muse is doing just fine, as I truly enjoyed your insightful read. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago

it looks like you're getting your muse back just fine! i likd this poem a lot. thanks!

Posted 1 Year Ago

this is a very beautiful writing ,so romantic so easy flowing and so witty and thoughtful...
I know what I don't want to be
I'm not afraid to die alone
I find pleasure in the simplest things
I smile even when I cry
I do not mind when I get burned
In love with love and imperfection
I'll gladly share my peace of mind...
these are very wise words,exactly of someone at a great peace with himself,i never mind to look perfect ,who want to?i dont care ,for what any will say,as long as i have a sharp mind,and as long as i am easy and at peace with myself,thats what i care for,this is some wonderful thoughtful writing ,i really enjoyed it a lot...

Posted 1 Year Ago

'Stairway To Heaven' booming out on the radio as I read your poem, which I found a very visual read, a bit like watching a video accompanyment to a famous bit of music. '...everything I love is free' is a lovely thought and full of truth. The second verse is delightful. OK I know you are not going to stick your hands on hot-plates, but the notion of drawing something positive from a mishap, or pain is a good way to be, especially as the world is an imperfect place. I am sure there will be no shortage of buyers for such sheer love of life.

Posted 1 Year Ago

This was witty, fun, and had a great sense of direction! Thanks for sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago