I want you to know

I want you to know

A Poem by ♥Jennifer♥
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A personal experience!

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I Want You To Know

 

She says I Love You,

but he says it's just a lie.

She asks him what she has to do

to prove her love to him.

She knows how she feels

deep down inside

but he doesn't

and never will know.

He doesn't realize

that she cries herself to sleep

every night

because she loves him.

He wonders why

she is always down

and depressed.

He asks her

"whats wrong?"

she tells him "nothing im fine"

He told her ok then walked away.

He thinks he knows her all so well

but he doesn't know

that he is only

causing her pain

and suffering

in her broken heart.

He tells her

that she needs to

get over him

and find a new guy

but she can't.

She doesn't want

anyone else

but him.

Babes i want you to know

how much I Love You.

 

 

 

 

© 2008 ♥Jennifer♥


Author's Note

♥Jennifer♥
what do you think?
have you been through something like this?
comments are always well appreciated thanks....

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One sided love is always a horrible thing to go threw...speaking from personal experience.

I think this is a really heartfelt poem.

Good Write

Posted 15 Years Ago


This piece really got to me. I am and have been going through this very same situation. So i sincerely feel your pain and hurt. I have not yet fully recovered and I know the road will be long. I hope you can help your self heal through your writing, at least that is what im trying to do myself. Thanks for sharing.
REally good write : )

Posted 16 Years Ago


i love it you kept your rhythm throughout and has some deep feeling in it! keep up the good work! write some more 2! =)

Posted 16 Years Ago


Thank you to everyone that reviewed my poem. Its well appreciated!!!:]

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is great! Very descriptive! I haven't experienced anything like this, but the flow of it made it feel realistic to me.
-Brie

Posted 16 Years Ago


I have often felt this very same way and had a similar situation happen to me, sometimes I still think and dream about him even though it's been over five years since he broke up with me. When people tell you time heals all wounds, obviously they've never experienced a savagely broken heart. Excellent write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Time does not heal all things. Time erases nothing. But, time does shadow in the white parts with a little hint of gray, so that you can't quite feel the intensity of the pain as deeply as you once did...
Great write...getting it outside of the body is a great way to start.
Peace,
Peaches.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very sad and poignant, I have been through something similar as while ago, like you I put it in a poem. I Like yours it flowed well, I felt your pain and anguish in your words.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I loved your poem. The rythem flowed well. It was sad and brought back memories for me. I think you are a talented writer.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 18, 2008

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♥Jennifer♥
♥Jennifer♥

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This is also true because alot of people onli bring drama and bullshit and thats why they are the past!!! I have been here and i know that it is very sad=[ This is s0000 tru!! more..

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