Wow .. beautiful poem of love. I love this one too, can see the whole world in your words ;)
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9 Years Ago
Thank you for such a wonderful compliment and review. Its so nice to hear what the reader thinks and.. read moreThank you for such a wonderful compliment and review. Its so nice to hear what the reader thinks and feels. I appreciate very much what you've said here. It encourages me to write more.
Needs very little improvement, if any. You wake up with thoughts like this? You are lucky. Like a lily, beautifully put, liked this a lot and its unique format.
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9 Years Ago
Thanks so much Leigh for reading and reviewing. Your review is encouraging.
Jen.. read moreThanks so much Leigh for reading and reviewing. Your review is encouraging.
Is this a personal experience or just a dream thought that you captured before it escaped into the night?
I enjoyed the visual you created in this free write.
Trace
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9 Years Ago
I've experienced growing apart for sure. I like to write about the end of love for some reason, but .. read moreI've experienced growing apart for sure. I like to write about the end of love for some reason, but yes I woke up in the middle of the night and wrote this.
I like the way you turned this into a personal experience - "or maybe that was just your affect on me. . . " This is a sweet short love poem and it draws a lovely picture - thanks for the share