Once Upon A Flower

long ago but not forever ago

Once upon a love story,
you took my hand
and swore to me
that whatever the cost
you'd die for me.

The ending came soon
to our short lullaby
you lied and laughed
behind my back;
my greatest fear
come true.

Misery and more
hit me as I wore
all your lies
over my eyes.

you pass me, I pass you
I died a little less
every passing that came by.
No more Misery
You're not my goal
any more.

I only wanted your love
and you only gave me hate.
you're all I ever wanted
but now you're
all I have forgotten.

you Love me,
you Love me not,
Just don't regret
the Love you forgot.

Reviews

[Angelic Surrender]

So sad. great work

[Chrissy]

Lovely Job I love it. :)

[AK]

Awesome! So well written it captured my emotions...

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful write. Feel the pain you write with. flows so beautifully to it's tragic end.

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i'm a sucker for rhymes :3 but this was awesome!!!!! it was like my sugar i just kept eating off it and it was scrumdilumcious very potent poem, sad but powerful ^-^