A Poem by JayDee

once great friends
now bust
slowly fading
in more than just trust

you found another
yeah that's great
just like those in the past
you share a common trait

i'm happy for you
even though you lied
yeah, it's not cool
but as long as you are satisfied

your off days
i did look forward to
but you found a new friend
...i hardly ever see you

we argue constantly
again and again
yet nothing changes
and i'm still left in pain

you say you need to step back
because things got too insane
and yet when i called again too see you
you were back there in great disdain....

don't lie...
that's all i ever asked
and now we are here
nothing of us from the past

© 2017 JayDee

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don't lie...
that's all i ever asked
and now we are here
nothing of us from the past

LOVE This part the most.
I just despise when people lie to me. nothing hurts more. I enjoyed this it's full os feelings. sorry you got hurt by someone.

Posted 1 Month Ago

I know others have made the same promise..
but no matter what..
just know I'll always be there by your side even if I can't physically be there.. ALWAYS.. ({)

Posted 9 Months Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


9 Months Ago

Thank you Udithah....

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2 Reviews
Added on May 5, 2017
Last Updated on May 5, 2017



Johannesburg, South Africa

I, JayDee, believe everyday is a second chance. more..

...cracked... ...cracked...

A Poem by JayDee

Re-u-nOt... Re-u-nOt...

A Poem by JayDee

just let go just let go

A Poem by JayDee