The never ending grief...

The never ending grief...

A Poem by Jessica
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i just randomly wrote it. I was inspired by something.

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As the fire burn and the ashes form,

 We get sucked into the vicious storm,

We argue and argue until them points,

Where hatred rolls of the tongue and it disappoints,

Usually when the fires burnt we stood tall,

But now we’ve has been downtrodden and growing ever small,

What ever happened to the past?

 To it is forever lying cast,

They told us sweet lies and we believed,

But now the magic's long over; and yet still we grieve.


© 2010 Jessica



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Good job. Though you have some problems with the poem but people can still understand it easily. I enjoyed the story line of how you compare that goods of the past and the bads of the present. But as "Meet the Robinsons" says, "Keep moving forward."

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Added on April 21, 2010
Last Updated on April 22, 2010
Tags: ash, grief, grieve, fire, sweet lies, lies, downtrodden, magic, atred, never, ending

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Jessica
Jessica

Peterborough, Cambridgeshire, United Kingdom



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Hello there. I am called Jessica. I write things. Some of the early stuff on here is just terrible but I am too lazy to delete them. Plus I can always use them as a scare tactic. So yes.. more..

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A Poem by Jessica


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A Poem by Jessica