The Lion and his Dove

In English we has a teacher testing her "skills" We had to write a poem using only methaphors and a stimulus.... This was my result........

Hyenas sit in the hall gathered and laugh,

A dove glides down the long narrow path,

Women sit, crying rivers,

Penguins wait at the top and givers,

Alpha lions face the future, another day,

Leaving the nest, the bird flys away.

Reviews

[deeps]

I like this cute and clever.
Very well written as well as said

[Becca*Type2012]

I like it

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Hehe, I remember that lesson...

I believe those few weeks with that alcoholic teacher ruined our education...

And then that *very, very nervous new teacher* gave us this task.... Ahh, the memories *wipes away tears* Ahem, anyway, THIS IS IMMENSE. I don't think anyone else will get what this is about... But just wow, this is wonderful...

Hmm, I wonder where I put my metaphor that I wrote in that lesson :/