Cosmic Bliss

Cosmic Bliss

A Poem by Jessi Leigh
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A taste of touch

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Bathing in the bittersweet sunshine of love
Always craving warmth yet burning in its heat
Goodbye to love after its long embrace
To let go, to let it be free

Touch lingers, whispers in glimpses onto hot cheeks, day dreams, night dreams. Horny thoughts.


To rest my hands upon yours, to feel your face, your chest - I crumble. Helplessly in state of Mesmerized bliss
To feel... Warmth, tenderness, lust, excitement, cosmic bliss
A teardrop of intimacy
Sighs of past pains
The bitterbliss of a tantric tryst

Some days I care for no more than your smile or your warrior hugs which soothe fears you see but do not understand.

I could spend hours reading the pages of your eyes
Traveling the roads of your body mapped in every direction toward bliss.

Enough
Imma crazy fool
Let's make love

© 2011 Jessi Leigh


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Love the line "always craving warmth but burning in its heat"
Great meter in the first stanza!!! :)
"A teardrop of intimacy" nice!
"bitterbliss" that is a fantastic word i wish i thought of it
"your warrior hugs" :)
Haha great ending too

This piece is so strong overall; no criticism needed : Great Write!!!! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sublime...Excellent Poetry. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


CF has a warm, luscious, intimate flow that takes the
reader on a journey of utter bliss.. I especially love the lines:
"I could spend ... eyes" & "Traveling the roads ...toward bliss"..
The playful ending is wonderful too ... Good job, Jessi L..
LLR

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Wonderful word crafting and a beautiful look at reflections exotic in this poem.
"Bathing in the bittersweet sunshine of love" :-)


Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful, i enjoyed reading this, thankyou for sharing

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this. This is incredibly delicious!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely illustrated piece of art! I liked the way you expressed it! I haven't found it absurd at any stage! No need of warning for under 18 :P

Posted 12 Years Ago


amazing ending to the poem....I really enjoyed reading this...very, very good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Holy Toledo,
Everyday things just get hotter
at your house and this is a scorcher.
Great stuff.
Thanks,
-----John

Posted 12 Years Ago


"I could spend hours reading the pages of your eyes"

Precious Jess! What a living write.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on October 31, 2011
Last Updated on November 7, 2011
Tags: bliss, lust, love, tryst, lovers, beauty, memories

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 Jessi Leigh
Jessi Leigh

Cape Town, South Africa



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I love to speak my mind. My words are rough and pretty raw. I get overwhelmed by life pretty easily, but love to push myself and see just how much I can take in. I'm here to learn, to grow, to e.. more..

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