Traffic

exhausts choking

red lights glaring

breaks groaning

flickers hoping to find relief in another way

where is the pause to let the man in front so that he can cross the street?

it's all about us reaching our final destination isnt it

we let fear and poisonous gasses cripple our better judgement

Reviews

[Jay Levon]

I love this, well done!

Beautiful metaphors used to create the perfect prince king of the elusive freedom to express. Beautiful work sister...

[MAC]

yes we do and so is life. as a people we have stopped thinking for not only ourselves but the betterment of others. i love this write. excellent!