Me And Her

She used to make me purr

Me and her

Somehow

In some sense

We Still Endure

Me                                 And                                 Her

I can’t wait forever

Tickle my fascinations like a feather

I need you while I sleep

If you’ll sow, I’ll gladly reap

 

Come little girl we both know your clever

I thought you like a bit of challenge to your endeavor

Dreaming, honey it’s like we’re never there

Lover be careful where you leap you never know where it gets steep

 

You tell me you love me

You say here you’ll always be

Lately, these nights you’re more like a memory

Give me just one reason to see past all this misery

 

I do love you, why can’t you just see

These conversations of yours seem always about need

These days sweetie it’s all about me

I’ll give you several on why to leave me be

 

If I go we’ll never know

What ever happened to all of your “We’ll take it slow”

What do you think our love is, some kind of burlesque show

Your photos became arrows, you’re the bow

 

If you really want to then just go

What happened to “I don’t do blow”

I think our love is a whole lot of eating crow

I was only trying to capture your glow

 

I just wanted you to know I loved you

Now there’s so many things we’ll never do

Baby you bring the plural to playing the blue’s

 

And you, no other would I choose

You were the soil in which I grew

You’re my favorite pair of wing tip shoes

 

Why can't we work this out

Is there really that much doubt

 

Because when we do we scream and shout

We both know that’s not what love is about

 

Oh but love, I know your soul

 

Then you know I won’t let you fall in my hole

Author's Note

i thought I would try something new. Well what do you think?

Reviews

[waif]

What I like most about this is that it has so many details that are specific to the individual, and in love poetry that can be a challenge. It can be easy to fall into saying things in a way that they've been said for centuries, but you don't do that and that makes this cool to read. I mean there's genuine trouble in the narrative, but the way it's presented gives it authenticity. I enjoyed it.

[Jessica Gillitzer]

Thank you very much I did have a hard time trying to keep it making sense. I didn't think it was all that original personal details, oh ya definitely. Your so sweet it make me very happy you liked this.
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[MoriartyMesa]

At one point a person may think these are opposing thoughts, but the ring the same to the reader. The music not only fits, but it gives the flow to a nice beat.

[Jessica Gillitzer]

thank you bunches moriarty. They are two points of view and statements told through my eyes and ears. i try to tell stories in most my writings I hope to get away from that soon though. >_<
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[Vannessa Monroe]

absolutely adore the whimsical flow dear - oooo love it!

[Jessica Gillitzer]

heya, thanks on that. i thought you were all mia =o)
you were missed
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[Vikrantsingh]

Creative & Wonderful :)

[Jessica Gillitzer]

Thank you Vikrantsingh it's nice that you enjoyed this.
:)

[Steven]

'I was only trying to capture your glow'

Really like that line.

[Jessica Gillitzer]

Thanks Steven i'm happy you liked it.
:)

[Simon Welsh]

I love it :) Those last few lines really resonate xx

[Jessica Gillitzer]

Thank you Elliot I'm glad you liked it.
:)

[MissKayP]

Very relatable. I absolutely love the ending... "Oh but love, I know your soul....Then you know I won't let you fall in my hole". The dialogue is unique as well. Good job!!

[Jessica Gillitzer]

i am glad you liked it MissKayP. I have been feeling very adventurous in my writing lately. I get so inspired by all the writing here. I have seen some real interesting stuff just the past day or so alone. i will try to stop over and see what you got. Thanks again.
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