Betrayal

A Poem by Jesus0996

Inspired by life experiences and cristian Castro "si me amaras"

Betrayal

The sky was crying,
My heart was dying,
The phantom shadow of my
loneliness surrounded my soul,
The world was dark and blurred,

My poetry became sadness,
Every word was a tear,
Dark,
So dark as the depths of my fear,

My soul cried for help,
The despair was too great,
Darkness became part of myself,
Even Death try to rescue my soul but it was too late,

I became darkness,
My love turned into rage,
My soul was dead,
It was replaced by sorrow and hatred,
I became a hollow,
I was completely taken,
I loss the love that was once sacred.

© 2017 Jesus0996

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Christian Bonoan

I love how the words are arranged, and how I felt each words written. I just personally think that betrayal is not the best title for this. This is just my opinion though.
Anyway, this is beautiful! Keep it up!