Blinding the beauty

Blinding the beauty

A Poem by Jeyanthi
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Improved with the help of Infernal Machine Suggestions.

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What is beautiful?
I self said _
the one worthy
to be gazed
again.

What is ugly?
I self said _
the one
not to spare
another glance.

Now i wonder
why beauty
can be seen
only through eyes,
but can't looking
through hearts?

I think,
its my blindness. :P


© 2015 Jeyanthi


Author's Note

Jeyanthi
Its not in poetic form, but still i want these words to be written. :P

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True beauty is seen only with the heart
Everything else is fake
Superficial and time limited

I loved this one particular piece
Speaking of the real truth of beauty .....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeyanthi

8 Years Ago

Yeah... what you said is right. :)
Thanks for stopping by Nisreenaa...
Well, another great piece. I found only one thing that i'd change...maybe instead of "an another" simply write "another" just a thought. But overall, i like your work. And that means, that I'll rate this 100# like every other piece i read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeyanthi

8 Years Ago

Okay... I edited as you suggested ;) now i may get one more 100 right. ?:D
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

The rating is the same 100#
Jeyanthi

8 Years Ago

Okay!!! its fine by me. :I
but can't looking
through hearts?

I think,
its my blindness.

So it is called "Love is blind"
It is very good Question. I think we are living in fake world, and want to all time showbaazi.
It is very good write and good read friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jeyanthi

9 Years Ago

Oh thank you!
You got it right. :)
Saddam

9 Years Ago

Always welcome dear.
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