Our love story

Our love story

A Poem by ElizaB

A love story;
Is that what you want?
It's what I asked for,
In stars and sand.
In moments like this,
When you take my hand.
I asked for your heart;
Your love;
Your kiss.
Isn't love grand?
Worth living for?
Bliss...
For I'm here,
And I'm living,
For moments, like this.

© 2017 ElizaB



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I really loved it how you put a rhetorical question and answer it. It really engages the reader. It is also a great demonstration that represents that poetry really is a art!!

Good read.

Posted 5 Days Ago


I live for poems like this. Well done!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


ElizaB

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you, you're very kind :)

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ElizaB
ElizaB

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