Shadowed Sun

He let go;

Or perhaps it was me,

The sun sinks slow

Across the sea.

Shadows fall

Into sand

After it all

Just take my hand,

I knew about her

Right from the start

Before we were 

Entwined in heart.

Years gone

Our love past

Awake until dawn

Paint on the mask.

You've found anew,

Leave me to rain,

All we went through,

Leave me to pain,

Lines I cross

Life enrage

Sorry for loss

Ink upon page...

A love to lose

A love to death

Forever my muse

Until my last breath 

Reviews

[emipoemi]

Mesmerizing! In all honesty, I don't find "you've found anew.....leave me to pain" completely understandable, but that didn't take too much away from the whole experience of reading this poem. It's beyond words, and the ending is golden. Well done!