The Purple Altar

Just something that popped up in my mind.

The purple altar

Waiting above

Blood as the offering

Or your love.

Author's Note

Sometimes it so happens when I can't read a poem or story beyond a few lines, just because it doesn't interest me. If the same is the case with my poems, I would love to know that. Honest to god reviews will be appreciated! :)

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Wow this one will be in Favorite reads. makes me think of Jesus. we are washed with Jesus blood and cleansed from all sin. purple is a royal color for kings to wear Jesus is this worlds only king. and he is love we are to show love like Jesus. I will tell the earth is Just the earth not our creator I used be so blinded by that but we are the dust of the earth is where we will go when we pass on nor can plants and veggies feel pain like we do but I respect the earth but I don't worship the earth our Creator is God and at times he causes storms not mother earth as ones say and they can be warnings for some to turn from their sin or they just need rain for the plants. Jesus comes to us with blood running like a river from his hand he cleanses us with his blood once we claim him as lord and confess our sins and turn from them and vow to follow him and accept him into our heart and believe he died on the cross for our sins on Calvary. so purple is a Royal color that kings wear everywhere many of them did. BRAVO nice work. blessings

[xDalliance]

Thank you so much dear! Yes your explanation is so true! I'll always keep it in mind! :)

[Im His Daughter]

I agree B. I agree! I immediately too thought of Jesus!! However I got "blood is the offering of your love!" I think someone needs to listen more to those inner sayings! :) They speak truth! Good one!!!

[KWP]

oooh leaves a lasting impression of so many unanswered questions ... inviting us to think further ... I like it ... well done chick x

[BlackRose]

Very nice for such a short piece. Kind of like relationships. Either it's love or it's bloody hurts. or even better as KindredPoet said like God and his offerings.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Short but sweet. Nicely written. ^_^

Kaze~

[Saddam]

This is beyond. ये है दोहा, चौपाई में । Can anyone imagine even small things may be attract your imagination. Mujhe ye sabse sundar laga, at_least one of yours, and mine too.

Mai ise bar-bar padne ke liye print lunga taki ise bhi badiya likhne ki koshish kar sakun.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Your fairy godmother says You are an awesome writer true.Nicely penned J:)

[xDalliance]

Thank you fairy godmother Vi! I always get elated when I get good reviews from you! :D

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww good writer will always get good reviews even without her fairy godmother you hear J ?

[xDalliance]

Hahaha God this was a very good compliment. Thank youuu fairy godmother I'll always keep that in mind! :P

[Vidya Bacchus]

Very good hunny .You always do :)

[xDalliance]

Thank you Vi! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Aethereal]

Your poem inspired me to write this gift poem for you which you may keep as your own:

Love Offering

Since we’re children of the mud,
Mother Nature’s in our blood.
Someday we’ll return to dust
giving up her gift of rust.

[xDalliance]

Wow. These lines are better than the ones I've written. Makes me wish I had written them! Anyways thank you fro sharing your inspiration with me. Motivates me a lot! :)

[Cryingkate]

This write plays on my inner questions I already Ponder.
Do we need the blood sacrifice to go to the Alter of God?
Or did one come and tell us that we do not need to sacrifice and his words were distorted and misused by those who do practice blood sacrifice?

[Cryingkate]

I love your refreshing Authors notes, I will gladly abide.
I'm not sure if I want the same treatment :-) LOL
Cause a lot of times I only write for fun or relaxation or just hoping to send some love to someone and It doesn't need critiquing in those cases.
How about if you don't like mine just let me know it doesn't interest you or something like that?
You can always find grammar and punctuation faults in my work. I was never really properly schooled on it and am still learning. Go for those if you wish.... I can't seem to learn without being shown what is wrong.

Thanks Connie

[xDalliance]

Hey Connie! Yes it often happens with me. Sometimes I just write without giving much thought about the plot or rhyming. Sure! But I already like your poems so it shouldn't be a problem!

[Cryingkate]

Well thanks but I'm sure you'll find some muddy roads there.
As far as your work I loved this one and I'm gonna do some more excavating.
I have a hunch there is some good archeological treasures here :-)

[xDalliance]

Haha I don't think you'll find any gold here. Just a little copper or iron maybe! As far your poems are concerned, I haven't found any fault yet! They are seriously amazing! :)

[Cryingkate]

Say Copper and Iron may become all whats left precious someday. I hear all our Gold is being moved to another planet. :-)

[xDalliance]

Hahaha. I love your sense of humour! But there may be some illegal gold stashed somewhere you know. I can always find it with you! (don't mind the bad metaphor!)

[Cryingkate]

oooooh no bad metaphors here, I'mm dressed to go gold mining are U ready?

[xDalliance]

Oh sure! I have my head gear on! Don't want rocks to fall on my head! P

[Cryingkate]

Oh God forbid a rock should fall on our heads and make us any dizzier :-)

[xDalliance]

Hahaha. Your comments are amazing! Bring a smile on my face! :)

[Cryingkate]

I think your fun.. where have you been hiding?

[xDalliance]

Under the rocks :P Didn't have a hat before you came!

[Cryingkate]

Oh I had to ask right? Ha ha ha Great answer there Rocky ! :-)

[Frieda P]

Reads as though it could be a choice between heaven or bloody hell. Intriguing read...could take this one a few places. I'd leave the period off at the end, just my preference in poetry. Nicely pen'd.

[xDalliance]

Thank you Frieda! Your review obviously means a lot! I love your poems! :D

[Frieda P]

You're welcome Jharna and so kind of you to say, enjoyed! :)