Just To Be With You

If there’s one thing that I could wish for

It is just to be with you forever

For it makes me feel contented,

Contented with your love

 

No, there’s nothing that I want more

But your warm embrace,

Warm embrace that I still longing for

If there’s a chance just to be with you

 

Wonder if there’s still hope,

Hope that I could be with you

Fidelity that still lingers,

Lingers for you and I.

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Awards

Good Written

Nov 12, 2010

• The Best Day Ever
• Just To Be With You

Reviews

[the_stoic]

"Wonder if there’s still hope,
Hope that I could be with you"

i wish i could let you know how closely i relate to these words .. read my write titled "someday" to know the same ... ah ! my dear friend .. i presume that you too are a man and how strange for them to say that men run away from commitments ... nothing can fill that void that's in our hearts my dear friend . just wishing that your hope outshines all the barriers that's in between you and your lady .

[Jesse Jacques]

this sounds so deep. i think you did a really good job.

I like the pacing and word choice in this writing. It is an enjoyable read.

[Dalebear]

There is always hope no matter how there is

[Ruth]

This is wonderfully expressed :)
A poem that leaves the reader really feeling the hope!
A great poem
xx

[Hello, Goodbye]

I wish I could return to when I first met my wife and the first feelings of infatuation began their growth.. thats what your poetry feels like: Love at its most basic clear and full of fresh intentions.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

the_stoic thank you for that touching review