Your Lovely Brown Eyes

Your Lovely Brown Eyes

A Poem by Jas Alejandrino Ramos

I saw you from a distance,
I saw those lovely brown eyes of yours,
Your lovely brown eyes that captivates me
That captivates every man on earth

Your lovely brown eyes that seduce me,
Seduce me to be with you,
Be with you forever,
Forever on looking those lovely brown eyes

My eyes adore your eyes,
Your lovely brown eyes that seduce me
And captivates my heart

To only stare at those lovely brown eyes.

© 2010 Jas Alejandrino Ramos


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A little Missed Connections but still good.

Posted 10 Years Ago


OMG!!! my poem got 5,174 views!!! this is insane!!...thank you :))))

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lovely brown eyes, unfortunately I have blue eyes

Ace poem

Dalebear

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh, that's lovely. all the charm of dark eyes here.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely :)
Those brown eyes sure have an impact lol
Great poem love
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This seems like it lacks a focus. Confused and unsure. A frantic thought on something much more powerful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Or male.. I didnt mean to genderize it like that..haha

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your adornment with the visual tools makes want to know about the rest of this desired lady. .

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 12, 2010
Last Updated on September 12, 2010

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Jas Alejandrino Ramos
Jas Alejandrino Ramos

Pampanga, Philippines



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I am a Bachelor of Arts in Communication graduate who loves to write poems and novels...I have also a passion for interior designing. more..

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