Because Of You

You’re the only one who keeps me standing here,

Waiting and keep on holding on,

Holding on for what I know is impossible

‘Cause you’re the thing that I can’t get rid off in my life

A life that is meaningful because of you

 

And every night when the cold wind blows,

I always do the same thing,

The thing that you taught me,

Taught me how to love,

Love that will keep the night warm

 

Whenever I see the clock ticking,

I remember the times we shared together,

Times that you made moments of my life,

Moments that I will never forget,

Unforgettable moments with you

 

I will climb the highest mountains

To see the most beautiful scenery,

A beautiful scenery that will make me believe,

Believe that you will be in my life forever,

Forever like a love that is true, because of you.

.....................................

Jas A. Ramos

Arayat,Pampanga,Philippines

[email protected]

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Awards

Best Written

Oct 4, 2010

• October Love & Darkness rises
• Because Of You

Honorable Mention*

Oct 4, 2010

• He Said /She Said
• Because Of You

3rd Winner

Oct 8, 2010

• Group Contest
• Because Of You

Love is real

Oct 22, 2010

• Love Games
• Because Of You

happiest

Nov 28, 2010

• Light or Darkness
• Because Of You

2nd Prize Purgatory

Dec 13, 2010

• The Reviewer's No Forced Rhymes Poetry Contest
• Because Of You

1st

Jan 13, 2011

• Best of 2010
• Because Of You

Second Runner-Up

Jan 15, 2011

• Best of 2010!
• Because Of You

3rd place

Feb 5, 2011

• The Amazing 3 day contest
• Because Of You

lovely!

Feb 15, 2011

• Unconditionally, irrevocably, and unaturally, in love
• Because Of You

So Cool:-)

Feb 22, 2011

• Random Writing:)
• Because Of You

654

Feb 23, 2011

• Love
• Because Of You

Congratulations!! You were pretty up there!!

Mar 2, 2011

• Poem of You
• Because Of You

Third Place

Jun 10, 2011

• Best Piece of Writing
• Because Of You

Average

May 8, 2012

• Wow Writing
• Because Of You

Great!

May 14, 2012

• Someone Who Inspires You
• Because Of You

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Looking for some positive writes to start the week and this was brilliant.. filled with hope in the one who keeps you grounded and filled with the beauty of life. I have such a person in my life... gives me that sense of the impossible coming true. Excellent write.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank you so much...glad to inspire you :)

[Celie Rose]

Beautiful poem. Love is powerful. Expression and emotion are very good. Love is a stronghold and can also teach us how to love. Well written. Keep writing.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

Thank you!

[TL Boehm]

Lyrical and lovely - a beautiful read

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank you!

[serenae_dc]

nice descriptions. simple poem yet very romantic. congrats on all your awards, kabayan!

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

Salamat! san ka sa pinas?

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow! I was amazed looking at the awards received by this piece. You are an amazing poet, Kabayan!
BTW, you posted this last 2010...that means you have been a poet for that long time. I've been here last January 4, 2013 so I'm just a year and 2 months here.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

wow maraming salamat kabayan! welcome to the writing world! where are you from?

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Roxas, Oriental Mindoro :)

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

Arayat, Pampanga ako :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

There's a group of Filipino writers here. I invite you to be a member of "Kabayan Atin Ito" Group so that you can mingle with our Kabayans here. Will you be active these coming days? It's almost vacation time. Konti na lang graduation na...

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

ok cge i will...oh wow wat course?

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Course? I'm already a teacher so I'm waiting for the summer vacation. LOL

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

ahahahahahaha

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thanks for all the reviews :)

[DalainaRenee]

Wonderful, written poem! Very lovely!!:) I enjoyed reading this!

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank you! :)

[R J Askew]

I read this as if the 'you' was an absent parent, though that may not be what you meant when you wrote it I admit. I wld love my kids to think of me that way. But then this makes me think of my own death, too. Sigh. Such is poetry! Thinking of death should inspire us to LIVE! the deeper now when we can.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank you! :)

[Sonia Aurelio]

simply beautiful! very well said! what a way to warm the heart! would really make a beautiful song with a wonderfully therapeutic melody to match it! well done

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank you! :)

[John Fitzgerald]

Sweeps along like a romantic melody. It's very pure, with no wasted words. good writing my friend :)

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank you! :)

[khalid]

very nicely written

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank you! :)