Me!

I don't know!!!

                When Hopes fades, Dreams ends,

                Everybody turns to Rely on God,

                I'm not Different, did the same.

Burned candles, not one, but many,

Asked for nothing, but Thanking

For the Best Sake he Given.

But when i leave there, i could see,

Only One Candle was glowing there.

                Now, I believes in God,

                so i can ask him, 

                "Why did you Made my life as such a Damn...?"

I know, Someone took away,

My Beats, Life, Thoughts ,and Happiness,

Oh My Lord, "Had You Played any Part in IT ?"

Say "NO",

So I could be 'HAPPY ?'.

                  I Wishes, is there any God, 

                  To tell everything,

                  So he should 'Reply' to me...

I asked only one thing, to him

But I'm the one who Messed out His Blessings,

His Perfect  Sake, but my Ultimate Mistake...

Reviews

[freelancejouster]

the first line should read "dreams end" for the sake of unity of amount and i don't know if ellipses are used to their best, here, and the capitalization is off-putting and a bit extreme and i don't understand the point of the green and red (don't tell me, i prefer the dark)... but i kind of like what you did here anyways. you asked the right questions in the right way.

[unknown]

I think most if not all can relate to this. We sometimes have habits of only seeking him when we are in trouble or in need. He continuously blesses us even when we doubt him.

[RedInk524]

It really would help if god answered back..

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Very touching.

[Lively]

God is the creator of all creatures. In a TV serial was a dialogue: A husband was convincing his wife (ABOUT HIS DAUGHTER MARRIAGE ), : See, we being parents are so much tensed, then, think about God, who is ours and our daughter's parent, how much tension would he have been suffering from....

[OtherWorldWoman]

I really liked this. It is very raw, pure, honest and the feelings in it touched me. Well done. I very much enjoyed reading this poem :)

[Tasha]

Wonderful writing,
A philosophy indeed. I agree with Toxicinity God does work in mysterious ways.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Dahlia Phoenix]

The philosophy in this poem is smooth as anything. God works in mysterious ways from what people tell me even though I don't really believe in his existence but the faith people put and the blessings they want. I believe those blessings come only when we're good people.

[Coyote Poetry]

The mystery of God is a different end for each of us. I learn in my lifetime. I made my life with good or bad decisions. I decided my journey. Life will teach us many things. God may be there for some. I believe in the karma of a life. People who swim in hate and violence will break even one day. Better to be kind and think before great decisions. A very strong poem. Open the door to many questions.
Coyote