hush

hush

A Poem by j

























Be still . . .
 
I can hear you
in
eyelashes resting
    on maiden cheeks
 
within
the silence of a weary mind
chancing blue grass in
       fading denim
 
inside
the curling petals
      of a virtual yellow rose
 
beyond
sifting sand measuring
      time yet leveraged
 
I canna see you,
              but i hear you everywhere.
 
 






© 2017 j



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Ah, yes...a real talent. Such a joy to experience, yet humbling.
You definitely have an enviable delicacy of expression and invoke vibrant images with a minimum of words.
I respect and applaud your ability greatly.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

j

7 Months Ago

oh you are so kind, Tobes. thank you for your gracious comments. i haven't written in quite some t.. read more
Tobes

7 Months Ago

Please do write more.
What a superb little write we have here folks, dont ya just wish you had written it first, I do.....

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

j

7 Months Ago

N! how'd this get by me? my apologies, my friend. i come 'n go sometimes and apparently missed yo.. read more
Neville Pettitt

7 Months Ago

No worries, my pleasure entirely......Neville
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I love this, J! It's so soft and beautifully eloquent. You are one hell of a writer, dear poet :) Merry Christmas to you J!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

j

2 Years Ago

thank you so very much, my friend [blushing]. i often reread my posts to try to see what you see in.. read more
and a touching poem of love it is !

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

j

2 Years Ago

thank you for your so-kind comment, wordman. :)
i have known lovers like this i think or is it only that i imagine them or have needed to forget them to get by

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

j

2 Years Ago

haha yer a sweetie, d.

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