Nevertheless

Nevertheless

A Poem by Johanna
"

I thought I lost you the other day..

"

Nevertheless


I thought I lost you the other day

I dreamt I was standing by your grave

But you were only a few blocks away

But I lost you nevertheless


I thought I saw you the other day

But it was a stranger wearing your coat

The one I gave you on your birthday in May

But I lost you nevertheless


I thought I called you the other day

But I couldn't go through with it

Even if I missed you I know you´d say

I lost you nevertheless


I thought I got over you the other day

Got this feeling of relief in my chest

But even with the heartache at bay

I lost you nevertheless


I thought I lost you the other day

and you were saying it was for the best

But you were only a few blocks away

But I lost you nevertheless

© 2015 Johanna


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B
Witnessing a loss
is hard
and this is done so kindly in your words
I guess after seeing the way you observe loss
maybe the other side is at loss

not you ......

Posted 8 Years Ago


Johanna

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words nisreen :)
B

8 Years Ago

You are simply beautiful :)
To love and lost only to rekindle... Beautifully thought out, this piece takes you through a brief moment in time and leaves you wanting... (nevertheless make the call)
bill

Posted 8 Years Ago


Johanna

8 Years Ago

Thank you Bill :))
A sad and touching poem, I like the different levels you went through in this write. The final lines really wrap this up tightly.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Johanna

8 Years Ago

Thank you :) Glad you liked it, thank you so much for reading and reviewing

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Added on December 4, 2015
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Johanna
Johanna

Norway



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