In our thoughts behind our minds Thoughts you see start to untwine Hints of threads crumbs of bread Iron their ways to what is said Like a gift in presence of a baker Wrapped in cloth a picnic maker Minds eye warmth on hearts ears Grassy hills near seas souvenirs Whispers uplifting as pelicans fly Expressions of love kites flight join skies Feast love letters high in minds meaning Sense on clouds a just meant in dreaming Tone of smile seams sewn on pillowed head Drifting off lately within your said bed Inner… thoughts… behind… our… minds…
Thank you for sharing this
wonderfully penned write.
I loved these stanza's lines.
Whispers uplifting as pelicans fly
Expressions of love kites flight join skies
Feast love letters high in minds meaning
Sense on clouds a just meant in dreaming
Tone of smile seams sewn on pillowed head
Drifting off lately within your said bed
Inner… thoughts… behind… our… minds…
sooner or later that kite does get up into the air...and sooner or later those inklings of thoughts become like kites...flying in plain sight, flying on a paper sky.
A wonderful use of style that definitely adds to the piece. I am known around these parts as the errant apostrophe hunter, so I would be remiss in not pointing out that crumb's should be crumbs, and Mind's eye should have its own apostrophe. Nice to meet you. :)