ZELLA BLACK COUGAR BLACK HEART

Zella is an evil black cougar in my first novel "Arise the Stone Witches".Belonging to Melvina Head of the Coven she has been her faithful servant for eons. Zella shapeshifts to human form on occasion

Often upon a moonlight night, prowls a sinister foe.
Hunting high on mountain top, to land the murderous blow.
Zella- Maligned and wicked, beyond the devil's compare.
Beastly spiteful cougar cat with shinning slinky black hair.

Dark huntress with evil intent, she seeks the prison key.
To loose her mistress on the world, from Melvina you will flee!
The 'Sothis Stella', the golden keystone, is her task to find.
To release a malevolent force, endangering all mankind.

Millennia have passed her by and now it is her time.
Turning into human form, she plots her hideous crime.
Dark clouds descend down, upon the circle of stone.
Time to place the nexus, on the universe's throne.

Will you be able to stop her? Would you even dare?
For none but few can stand up to..........
That beastly spiteful cougar cat
 with shinning slinky black hair.

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Reviews

[lothlorienwriter]

Having read the small part of Arise the stone witches with Zella in, it was great to see a poem about her. What a murderous cat, longing to know what else she gets up to. Hurry up and finish chapter 2.

Beastly spiteful cougar cat with shinning slinky black hair.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Thanks for kind review. :)

[Pencrafter]

Your poem reflects a great imagination and ability to write. Personally, however, I don't read stories involving witchcraft, graphic violence or sex, or what I percieve to be immorality. Those are my choices. I don't expect others to live by my standards. There are many great writers who I will never read. If you can accept my preferences, then I can welcome you as a friend.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Yes no problem and from what you have said above may I recommend my Magnus Opus Hermetica.......i think you will like it.

[Cynthia Man]

I really like Zella, no matter she is evil or not :) I agree with others, it'll be back by putting more darkness to the poem, it'll make it more absorbing :) But then, I like the way it is now anyways! :)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Thanks Cynthia your thoughts on this project of mine are very welcome especially Zella who you really seem to like!

[lothlorienwriter]

I really like Zella too dont kill her off any time soon John

[Cynthia Man]

Yes! I LOVE Zella!
I agree, don't kill her that soon! :)))

[The Random Writings Of ..]

Awe, I have a better understanding of Zella now. As I have only read Chapter 1. But now that I know what she is after and what evil she will unleash. I had questioned her intentions in Chapter 1, but now I see, that she is evil. Good write, and I see that you may do a little editing on here. Let me know when you do, and I should come back here after reading chapter 2 :)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

yes Zella plays the main part in chapter 2 really and will continue too through out the book......shes a nasty piece of work that does Melvinas bidding.

[The Random Writings Of Me..Kates]

So they are intertwined... Lovely! I love your mind! This is going to be one heck of a book! The characters you have introduced are exciting and make me want to more. Oh I can't wait to read on, and I am excited that I get to be a part of seeing you in your journey of this novel!!!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Ive got a funny feeling your not going to just see......your going to be a part of the journey am on at the moment.

[The Random Writings Of Me..Kates]

Oh! You are amazing :)

[PublishingAgent]

Ah having read chapter two I can relate to this poem!
Its okay this one but perhaps needs re working a little the other A.T.S.W. poems are great.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Yes i was thinking of rewriting this actually as the character Zella has really developed since I wrote this poem. Id like to make it a bit darker and longer in length.

[lothlorienwriter]

I think you should John, this poem is ok but it generalizes about Zella I think you should make it more evil / darker like the Melvina poem.

[Otsana]

Once again, this is going in my favourites and you have actually made me want to read your book!! I dont read books on here unless someone asks me, so thats saying a lot about your poetry. This poem is just bursting with imagination and beautiful descriptions. You have a great mind no doubt. Great work!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Thanks for review.

[rnuff]

Wow i totally love this piece, very nicely written

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Cheers Shorty

[paul barton]

This Cat shows no mercy.....that poor boy in Chapter 1!!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

She is an evil assasin

[JourneyBlu]

This is a great piece. It may have had more power with the context of the story from whence it came, but it was powerful all on its own with stark imagery. Thanks for sharing!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Zella is the black cougar cat belonging to Melvina.....her evilness is almost comparable to her mistress!

Thank you for your reviews