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Embracing Father.

Embracing Father.

A Poem by John Phoenix Hutchinson.
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Have you ever had a dream as powerful as this???

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Somber, I entered slumber.
Hoping to escape the pain.
Dark depression, had a hold on me.
Tender soul, brokenhearted slain.

As I fell into my dormancy.
Something happened, like never of yore.
Vibration, then hands lifting me up.
Naked, through mystical door.

Finding myself by childhood home.
Standing by pond, crystal clear.
Fishes swim with elegance and grace.
Feeding on my falling tears.

Suddenly, I hear my late Father cry out.
On a bed, he's prostrate before.
Kneeling beside, with my arms held aloft
I collapse and fall to the floor.

Awoken, by the warmth of his breath
He has entered my mind with his grace
"John do not seek darkness and death."
Weeping, we both embraced.






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John Phoenix Hutchinson.
4 time competition winner.

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Waking up to a dream that feels so real and bring tears rolling down your eyes is heartbreaking. I am sad for your sorrow. You have expressed your sentiments well and have shown us the deeper side of your depression, which I know can be hard to share. This is troubling on your mind. but I am glad you were able to get it down. Thank you for sharing my friend.

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The Random Writings Of Me..Kates

5 Years Ago

After re-reading this after your comment, I now understand fully the circle of clarity. I apologize .. read more
John Phoenix Hutchinson.

5 Years Ago

Thanks you sooooo much Kates :) The other great thing is I will never forget this dream and I now ha.. read more
The Random Writings Of Me..Kates

5 Years Ago

You are welcome! A great piece of writing is always great to have ESPECIALLY when you have a dream a.. read more



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This is really nostalgia and the feeling of oneness after long absent. The thought is highly articulated. Well done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wow! I've had such dreams- where the love is so intense it can't be described in words. Such dreams I believe really do come from the other side. well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Hi John,

A wonderful piece. Dreams can be so powerful and moving. I guess the subconscious mind can never be escaped and it shows us what is really powerful and significant in our lives.

Kudos. You are a fine poet and this is another marvelous addition to your repertoire.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 4 Years Ago


Congrats on your latest winning! This really is a powerful poem.. love your imagery and the ending is both beautiful and sad. Awesome job, John!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Congrats on winning the 1 day contest! All I have to say is Wow. This poem truly captivated me, honestly one of the best pieces I've read. Such marvelous flow, such beautiful words. Amazing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Sue
My eyes leaked too, this is so beautiful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wow what a dream...nicely penned John...and congratulations on the contest too...Rose:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

4 Years Ago

x@SR :)
SyberRose

4 Years Ago

aawwww...thank you John
Its a wonderful and gripping poem.
yes it happens at times the dreams are so real that its confusing what the reality is and at times the dream turn out to be path changer or at least a great soother in the depressing phase of life.
Best Wishes

Posted 4 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

4 Years Ago

Such was this poem.
Prritiy

4 Years Ago

Wish you all the best :)
An unforgettable dream; a stunning piece of poetry!
Outstanding, John!

Posted 4 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

4 Years Ago

Every time I read this now I feel the dream wrote the poem, not me and funnily enough I feel guilty .. read more
A profoundly heart wrenching poem, written with deep seated emotion and gusto, gutsy yet passionate, Brilliant :-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

4 Years Ago

Every time I read this now I feel the dream wrote the poem, not me and funnily enough I feel guilty .. read more
TrimarcoRansome

4 Years Ago

I think your Father would have been proud of you, your life and your writing, It is not what we do, .. read more

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John Phoenix Hutchinson.
John Phoenix Hutchinson.

Boot Eskdale, Cumbria, United Kingdom



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