Magnus Opus Hermeticus

Magnus Opus Hermeticus

A Poem by John Phoenix Hutchinson.
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The great work hidden within.

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Magnus Opus Hermeticus

Crystal clear, the waters of life.
Shown to me by angels of grace.
I sing, to the mornings stars.
Lord, my soul cries for you.

Grounded on earth's foundations.
Focused on heavens divine light.
I enter through minds door.
 Immaterial vision awaits me.

A gift from the mercy of God.
I have been born in my mind!
Immortal, I stand before the mirror.
Deathless, till the end of time.

Now for a moment, I ascend.
Floating, through clouds of wisdom.
I bathe in a universal castile.
Cleansed of earthly immorality. 

No desecration within the all above.
No violation, in the celestial hallowed halls.
Here I gaze upon hope, imagination and love.
Framed, bound together in trinity.

Far then on winged feet, I travelled,
Not held by the circle of life.
Till time and space became nothingness.
I sped towards a singular light.

Where I am afforded a brief glimpse.
 A golden cup of pansophic truth.
Burning in enlightenment flame.
Blinded, I am sent back into minds eye.

I awake from the dream glad.
For in the heart of this man.
I have learned of greater mysteries.
For in searching for truth,my soul is stilled.

The eternal flame burns brightly.

Cum Luce Salutem.







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Mia
You're an incredible writer. Each time I read a new poem of yours, I am amazed at what your mind does with words. And it always seems effortless. Where to from here? The obvious answer seems down but I don't doubt that you will find a way to top this and again leave me in awe.

"For in searching for truth,my soul is stilled."

Seriously! What planet are you from!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mia

5 Years Ago

You're clearly a natural...two months...that's amazing John! You are very welcome for my honest word.. read more
Larry Dyson

5 Years Ago

send us link for the poem submission again please?
John Phoenix Hutchinson.

5 Years Ago

http://www.writerscafe.org/groups/The-Magical-Mythical-Mystery-Compendium/8970/



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JOHN! JOHN!! JOHN!!! What Metaphysical manna this is! I have never been on such a journey in my minds eye. So to travel on yours was a ethereal experience to say the least........I feel cleansed. Your poetry is a joy an inspiration.


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Posted 4 Years Ago


What can I say, "very well done!" Thanks for sharing! I always like to read your poetry!
"Now for a moment, I ascend.
Floating, through clouds of wisdom.
I bathe in a universal castile.
Cleansed of earthly immorality."

Posted 4 Years Ago


this is a great write all the dots connected amazing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Interresting write has a very erie feel to it yet retaing a curious passage here and there to keep me as a reader search and reading on. Thank you for this request.

Posted 4 Years Ago


This mental, spiritual, soulful journey in meditation is so beautiful! A simple prayer- "Lord my soul cries for you" is answered so magnificently! Your poem allows the reader to share this journey. Just a quick note, in the third stanza from the end, you might consider keeping everything in the present tense, unless that's how you mean it to read.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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DrD
Very impressive with excellent word selection and form. I would personally have preferred "awakened from a gladdened dream" to "awake from the dream glad" but that's just me. I truly enjoyed this work and send my kudos

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like what you have written very much. It seems so tangible yet also not. I'm amazed by how... different you write. In the most positive way I could imagine.

A lovely write you have here :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

John Phoenix Hutchinson.

5 Years Ago

I am very good at remembering my dreams and the great ones I tend to put in a poem such as this.
Katherine Enma Pineapple

5 Years Ago

What a unique talent :D for me it only happens time to time :/
This is brilliant, awesome! Love your word choices and this flows beautifully.

Posted 5 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

5 Years Ago

Thank you B I really enjoyed writing this one.
a very deep profound write, very nicely written as well

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John Phoenix Hutchinson.

5 Years Ago

Ah your having OBE's dont be afraid of them they can be great fun once you learn how to control them.. read more
John Phoenix Hutchinson.

5 Years Ago

here = hear :)
Craba

5 Years Ago

i don't remember if i do or not. I just want to wake up i don't like the dreams at all, they scare m.. read more

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