Fish Kiss

A little girl in paradise!

She smiled so bright

 

And giggled in delight

 

When her parents told her she

 

Would come with them to visit paradise

 

She soon arrived

 

With a smile on her face, ever so bright

 

She ran to the beach and wanted to swim

 

Her parents nodded yes, she could go in

 

The water was clear, but it was missing something

 

Perhaps some fish, because there was nothing

 

But sand and water in the ocean

 

No swimming fish or any commotion

 

Then a small blue fish, swam up to her

 

She gave it a kiss and decided it were

 

Better to leave the fish in the sea

 

Then bring it back with her as a memory.

 

 

Reviews

[Sir Joseph]

Bravo on this precious little write :) is this an actual memory of yours??

[Rayne Droplette]

Thank you, and it just popped into my mind. Personally, every time I see it it bugs me. This is an old write. Glad someone can enjoy it, though :)

[Sir Joseph]

Well i definitely did :)

[Newspaper Skeleton]

Cute idea. (:

[Rayne Droplette]

Thanks.

[seeme]

an eco friendly poem.. nice!! this poem should be read by a lot of people for their eye opener.

[Rayne Droplette]

Thank you >3<

[Lindsay T]

This is unique and short & sweet. I enjoyed it from the beginning to the end, and you invite readers to keep reading. Nice work! :)

[Rayne Droplette]

Thanks :)

[Hisgrace]

definitely cute...something sweet and innocent about it. nice.

[Rayne Droplette]

Thank you.

[Harley (arbiter)]

i like it havent read anything really like it so thats awesome

[Rayne Droplette]

Thank you

[Miranda]

This is very unique. I love it!

[Rayne Droplette]

Thank you!