Always and Forever

Always and Forever

A Poem by Jordan

When i tell you i love you,

im not lying.

Im not just saying it for nothing.

I really mean it,

With all my heart.

When i tell you i missed you,

I really did.

I didnt just say it to get to your heart.

When i kiss you,

Im not just doing it randomly,

Im doing it because i love you.

Im doing it because you are special to me.

im doing it because i want you,

all of you.

Forever.

If you get mad at me, and walk away,

I would want you to know,

you mean the world to me,

I cant go to sleep because im thinking of you.

You are unforgetable.

My heart will always and forever,

belong to you.

 

© 2009 Jordan


Author's Note

Jordan
I dont think this one is that good.

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I agree with Nic, you aren't giving yourself enough credit :) You're an amazing writer :D
(Sorry I'm leaving you so many reviews. I just....idk :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well it is, "that good". You are not giving yourself enough credit. This is a great poem!

--- Nicole

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow.. I think this one is good to me.. especially that kind of openness coming from a guy.. to let you know you can't go wrong with freestyle if it's flowing from the heart.. love the simplicity and honest depth that is flowing here.. you are 15 according to your profile so this is really good.. keep at it!!! =)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Hey im Jordan. Obioiusly i like to write. Im not so good at writing poems or songs...but i love to write stories and books so i hope u like them. I am 15 and i play soccer, track and golf. My best fri.. more..

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