The End of Lonely Nights

Cause I belive that we all at least once have looked up into the sky and longed for that special someone.

I was a recluse then, hidden and sealed into a hearts dark world of hatred. 
How a soul could in a reality where even the night sky is full of light be as angry and desperate as me, unbelievable. 
They taunted me with their beauty these glimpses of a thousand false hope of places better than this. 
Twisted and corrupted into something beyond redemption heard this lonely fool an unfamiliar voice.
 As an unknown whisper drew it like a veil over my world. As a spring wind it made the ice start to melt and something new began to sprout at the words I wanted to but could never speak.

"is there not anyone? someone like me looking up at This sky so vast that can save me from my loneliness? "

The water of frozen mountain at these words were let loose to fall down my cheeks when this beautiful voice turned to me.
Closed eyes smiling in a sea of ​​happiness I'm happy to drown in over again.
 For This embittered fool was no longer alone.

Josefin. M

Author's Note

Well this is my first one and what i would like to know the most is what you think about the poem in genaral?
Can it even be considered to be a poem?
I would also apreciate spelling and grammar corrections.
Please let it be constructive critic and thank you on before hand i really appreciate that you have taken time to read this.

Reviews

[AndyJCash]

The basis of the poem is good, because as you say, we have all been in that place where we look up and wonder whether there is another lonely soul doing the same. Only thing I'll say grammatically, unless done for effect, "This" can be written as this, it doesn't need a capital letter :) Keep writing!

[Victoria Scott]

So true.....very well written....I think almost everyone can relate to it *raises hand* including me :) keep writing ;D